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 Critical Thinking Mock Exam (30 mins)

Write an essay of a minimum of 150 words in response to the following question:

 To what extent do modern digital-privacy laws protect—or restrict—individual freedom in an increasingly data-driven society, and is their overall impact more positive or negative?

Use your own words and IEEE citation style. Include at least three points, with at least one point taken from each source.


 [1] Ramos (2020)

- Large-cale legal reviews show that strict consent requirements give users clearer control over their personal data and reduce unauthorized third-party tracking.
    
- However, comparative case studies reveal that smaller businesses struggle to comply with complex documentation rules, limiting competition and innovation.
    
- Field experiments in online platforms demonstrate that “privacy-by-default” settings lower accidental data exposure but sometimes reduce personalization quality for users.
    

 [2] Lin & Artwood (2023)

- Surveys indicate that most citizens feel safer knowing companies must disclose data breaches within 72 hours under modern privacy frameworks.
    
- Analysts note that broad definitions of “sensitive data” can lead to over-cautious data handling, slowing medical and scientific research requiring large datasets.
    
- Regulatory audits show that underfunded oversight agencies often lack the resources to enforce privacy laws, weakening their intended protections.
    

 [3] Kambara (2024)

- Cross-national comparisons highlight that countries with transparent data-rights education programs achieve higher public understanding of digital autonomy.
    
- Interviews with cybersecurity experts suggest that privacy laws push companies to adopt stronger encryption, reducing long-term cyber-risk for citizens.
    
- Economic studies find that stronger privacy frameworks can improve international trust, making cross-border digital trade more stable and predictable.
    


digital privacy laws protect or restrict individual freedom ? and the overall impact is positive or negative ?

If people can choose whether algorithms access their personal data, that choice directly reflects their freedom. Digital-privacy laws support this by requiring websites to ask for permission before collecting sensitive information, giving users real control over how they are treated online. Experts also note that these laws push companies to adopt stronger encryption standards to avoid legal and reputational consequences when reporting breaches within 72 hours [2], which improves long-erm data protection. Specialists further argue that stronger encryption requirements raise the baseline for digital security across industries [3]. Taken together, these points suggest that user data becomes safer while individuals gain more control over their digital lives. So the overall impact of digital-privacy laws is positive because they protect personal freedom and strengthen data security at the same time.

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